Wednesday, December 23, 2009

What kind of tips/advice would you give my poem?

Darkness darkness go away


I don't want to cut myself another day


The night is falling on my soul


I only eat food from a black plastic bowl


I hate my life, it is unfair


My face is always covered by my hair


I hate the world


I hate you too


Death, darkness, sadness, boo hoo hoooooooWhat kind of tips/advice would you give my poem?
LMFAO





Bahahaha, that was funnyWhat kind of tips/advice would you give my poem?
that was deep/dark


pretty good



so... touching and.. dark... sob
Copy infringement on maynard james keenan.Just the way it the sounds

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